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First notebook entry: Introducing myself HI, I am just a“ return home ”girl who mad at her ielts so much. Ask 4 your help about English cause I am really good at Chinses so much . I mean it ！

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

HI, I am just a "return home" girl who is mad at her ielts so much.
I ask 4 your help about with English because I am really good at Chinses so much. I mean it!



*note* I am not sure what the meaning of your second sentence is.  You probably mean something like this:

I am asking for your help with English and in return I can help you with Chinese because I am really good at Chinese.

Also, "so much" isn't wrong, but it is unnecessary.  It's cute, but not good for formal English. ;)   By the way, what is "a 'return home' girl?" *note*

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