Nice to meet you

Hi, my name is Erika and i am from Brazil.
I want to learn English because, besides of it being very important to my career, I plan on doing a exchange  program as soon as possible.
My native language is Portuguese and I grew up in Brazil, in São Paulo.
I am studing Management, at Universidade de São Paulo.
I enjoy going out with friends, reading books and going to the movies. I love popcorn (:

Nice to meet you

Hi, my name is Erika and i am from Brazil.
I want learn English because, besides be it is very important to my career, I plan do a interchange (career change? not sure what interchange means) as soon as possible.
My native language is portuguese and I grew up in Brazil, São Paulo.
I am studing Management, at Universidade de São Paulo.
I enjoy going out with friends, reading books and going to the movies. I love popcorn (:

Muito bom! 

Nice to meet you

Hi, my name is Erika and i am from Brazil.
I want learn English because, besides be very important to my career, I plan do a interchange as soon as possible.
My native language is portuguese and I grew up in Brazil, São Paulo.
I am studing Management, at Universidade de São Paulo.
I enjoy go out with friends, read books and go to the movie. I also love to eat popcorn (:

Hi, my name is Erika and I am from Brazil.

I want to learn English because it is important for my career.

I plan to participate in a exchange/relocation program as soon as possible.

My native language is Portuguese and I grew up in Brazil, in São Paulo.
I am studing Management, at Universidade de São Paulo.
I enjoy going out with friends, reading books and going to the movies. I also love to eat popcorn (:    

Nice to meet you

Hi, my name is Erika and I am from Brazil.
I want to learn English because, besides of it* being very important to my career, I plan do on doing an interchange exchange program/relocation as soon as possible.
My native language is Portuguese and I grew up in Brazil, in São Paulo (better "in São Paulo, Brazil.")
I am studing Management at Universidade de São Paulo.
I enjoy going out with friends, reading books and going to the movies. I love popcorn (:

(you need the "of it" to show that "being" is refering to "English" and not to you: "ademais de ele ser" I think you could say)

Verbs following other verbs (plan on going, enjoy reading) are end in "-ing"

Espero que lhe sirva :)