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Keep going I am not a very outgoing person, and I am always not a talkative one among my friends, but I’d like to express my feeling by writing something down and I found out that writing is one of my vantages and I want to develop it as my future career. I want to write something that may echo in one’s mind and may change the world a little bit. Thus I was thinking that maybe I can write something down based on what I experienced in my life. So at the end of last summer, I left my home country and took my luggage to begin my adventure in Canada as a way to fulfill my life experience. I’m pretty sure about one point, that is, during the time studying in Canada, I can become more independent and more clearly in mind about what I really want to do.

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I am not a very outgoing person and I am always not a talkative one among my friends, but I’d like to express my feeling by writing something down.  I found out in that way that writing is one of my talents vantages and I want to develop it as my future career. I want to write something that may echo in one’s mind and may change the world a little bit. Thus, I was thinking that maybe I can write something down based on what I experienced in my life. So at the end of last summer, I left my home country and took my luggage to begin my adventure in Canada as a way to fulfill my life experience. I’m pretty sure about one point - that is that during the time studying in Canada, I can become more independent and more clearly in my mind about what I really want to do.

 

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