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introduction myself My name is lily and my age is secret ！ I Llike singing and dancing and i am singer before。 i like English so much，so i want to study my English！but my English is very poor，so i must be study to hard！ i need some help so i want you can help me。 thank you~

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Introducing myself

My name is Lily and my age is a secret!
I like singing and dancing. I used to be a singer. 你现在没有歌手吗?
I like English so much, so i want to improve my English！However, my English is very poor, so I must study hard!
I need some help so please help me.
Thank you~

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Introducing myself

My name is Lily and my age is secret! (Your name should be capitalized. Lily)

I like singing and dancing. I used to be a singer. ( I think that is what you mean).

I like English a lot, so i want to study (or practice) my English！But, my English is very poor，so I must study hard. (When you talk about yourself, I must always be capitalized.)

I need some help so can you help me?

Thank you~


Good job!
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I wonder why your age is a secret. Maybe you just like to keep a few secrets! A bit mysterious maybe! What kind of singer were you and what do you sing? I like your enthusiasm for English and I think you write nicely, so believe in yourself! I enjoyed reading your introduction. You seem to have a positive and expressive personality.

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