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My hobbies In my free time,i like watching movies,such as youth movie,comedy,action and horror,when i watch a horror movie,i need pulling a friend to accompany with me ,on the one hand ,i like horror movies,on the other hand,i'm fear to see it on my own,what a strange feeling! sometimes i like listening music,while i found a song which i love it,i will repeat listen many times. i still remember when i first time listen the song<when you believe> ,i'm fall in love it,in a period of time, i almost every night to listen this song. On the weekend ,i will meet with my friends,we share some happy things or bad things within the week,after i enter the college,i met a lovely girl,she name is Susan,we had became a good friend soon and we get along well with each other,i cherish the friendship between us. Last month,i borrowed a history book from library,this book mainly wrote a chinese historical figure-lvbuwei,after i read the book,i had a deeper understanding of him.Although he was not welcome in the history,but have to say he has a remarkable business mind.when you read a good book,you can get a lot from it.

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不错哦,坚持,不放弃,肯定可以进步的
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My hobbies

In my free time, I like watching movies such as youth (I think in English we would say "children's" or "kid's" movies) movies, comedy, action and horror.  When I watch a horror movie I have to have a friend watch it with me. On the one hand I like horror movies, on the other hand too afraid to see it on my own.  Such a strange feeling! Sometimes i like listening to music.  When I find a song that I like I will replay it many times. I still remember the first time I listened to one particular song and fell in love with it.  For a period of time almost every night I would listen to this song.
On the weekend I often will meet with my friends and we will share good and bad things that happened to us during the week.  Soon after I entered college I met a lovely girl named is Susan  .We quickly became good friends and we get along well with each other.  I cherish the friendship between us.
Last month I borrowed a history book from library  .This book mainly was about a Chinese historical figure-Lubuwei.  After I read the book I had a deeper understanding of him.  Although he is not a popular historical figure I have to say he has a remarkable business mind.  When you read a good book you can get a lot from it.

 

You have a very good vocabulary and understanding of English.  The main problem in your note is punctuation and captalization.  Also, I reworded many phrases so that they sound more natural in English; however, I did understand everything you said, which is the most important part.  Really good job!

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