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Which One to Chose? This afternoon I helped sarah correct test papers as well as the other two girls,so she insisted that she feed us dinner. Sarah is kind-hearted and humorous ,we talked a lot after supper.We talked about study,future and boyfriend.She encouraged us to study hard and set a goal and stick to it.The funniest thing is when she talked about boyfriend,she said we should find one and maybe just for fun for we are young now.Hmm sometimes I really want to have a boyfriend and some ones want to be mine,but I don't think they fit for me. What she said really have an important impact on me.I am on two different ways ,and cann't decide which one to chose?Maybe just be blind.I have no idea about my future. My ideal job is an interpretor,but my major is customs.I don't know what should i do ?I have an exam on insurance in November .I try my best to do it.One cannot be in the two different ways at the same time. I think i will work on customs for few years,and study English then can realize my dream.Can you give me some suggestion?

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I agree with Alex. Date someone, even if you don't think you like them all that much. You may find that you do like them. It also gives you experience. If its a bad date, at least you will know what you DON'T want in a boyfriend ^__^ I think if your dream is to be a interpretor you need to try to accomplish this dream. But because you are already so far into your Customs major, maybe you should finish this first and then try to become an interpreter. I believe you can do it. Just believe in yourself Mia, and you can accomplish anything your heart desires!
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This is a really good entry! As for boys, go on a date, and see how you feel! This gives you a chance to just talk, and find out if they are some one you want to spend more time with. Boyfriends are great, as long as you can maintain a balance to live your own life. As for school.. a Customs degree is going to give you great skills, and along with being able to speak English, can potentially offer many different career opportunities..
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Which One to Choose?

This afternoon I helped Sarah (Capitalize names) correct test papers as well as the other with two girls,so she insisted that she feed us dinner.
Sarah is kind-hearted and humorous ,we talked a lot after supper.We talked about studies, the future and boyfriends.She encouraged us to study hard, and (try not to use 'and' twice in the same sentence, there are only a few circumstances where it would be appropriate. Better to use a comma in this case) set a goal and stick to it.The funniest thing is when she talked about boyfriends,she said we should find one and maybe just for fun for  while we are young now.Hmm sometimes I really want to have a boyfriend and some ones boys want to be mine me as their girlfriend,but I don't think they fit for me.
What she said really have had (past tense) a important profound impact on me.I am on two different ways paths,and cann't decide which one to chosechoose?.Maybe just be blind.I have no idea about my future.
My ideal job is an interpretor,but my major is customs.I don't know what should i do ?I have an exam on insurance in November .I'll try my best to do it well.One cannot be in on the two different ways paths at the same time.
I think i will work on customs for few years,and then study English then to possibly can realize my dream.Can you give me some suggestions?

Profound:

–adjective

1.
penetrating or entering deeply into subjects of thought or knowledge; having deep insight or understanding: a profound thinker.

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