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Sample letter of application (Only Sample)
Dear Mrs. Cassandra:
Mr. Grintt, who is employed in your pet shop, has told met that there is an opening at your company for an assistant veterinarian. If I may have a few minutes of your time, I should would like to tell you why I think I can satisfactorily fill that opening.
You will notice the qualification summary that I have had of studied? animal healing in Oxford University and achieved a high standard of animal research from my qualification summary. While in college, I worked as a freelancer assistant veterinarian at Oxford's Animal Centre, where I took the award for best researcher in the category "new and rare animals". of new and rare animal researcher. I enjoyed my work and am confident that I can adequately fill your vacancy.
I can be ready to start work on August 27.
You may reach me at 777-7777 any time after 12.30. I hope that I may have the privilege of a personal interview at your pet shop.
Sincerely yours,
Well written overall, Yan. There are a few places where I'm not sure of your meaning because you omitted some words, or used an unusual word order. I hope my correction mirror your original intent. Good work.
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