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The eternal age of "why?"s Haven't you ever felt a peculiar desire to know why something works on a specific way? It's just like when you look at your cell phone and ask yourself: "How could somebody put so many functions on this little machine?". But this curiosity is likely to grow and turn into questions about life. And then, you've just started your way into philosophy. I don't know about you, but I live in a world where social inequality is so effective that it becomes a common problem of peoples’ life – so common that we don’t more care about solving it. Why do the things work like this? Why do people insist on believing that they will find happiness on money? Why don't the wealthy ones share their amount of money with the fellows who hardly have something to eat? Something really seems to be wrong in our society. Check your daily life and wonder if you're doing what really mathers. If you aren't, it's time to think about how you can change it. I dream about changing the world. And what about you? What makes you wake up every single morning? Check it out. Have a good 2013!

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The eternal age of "why?"s

Haven't you ever felt a peculiar desire to know why something works on in a specific way? It's just like when you look at your cell phone and ask yourself, "How could somebody put so many functions on this little machine?". But this curiosity is likely to grow and turn into questions about life. And (tyr not to start a sentence with and. Its sounds bad) Then you start to become philosophical.
I don't know about you, but I live in a world where social inequality is so effective ('effective' implies it has a positive effect) prominent that it becomes a common problem of people's lives are so common that we don’t more care anymore (this is like the negative of more but is has to be used with don't, didn't etc.) about solving it. Why do the things work like this? Why are things like this? Why do people insist on believing that they will find happiness on in money? Why don't the wealthy ones share their amount of money with the fellows people (fellows sounds too informal for this type of writing, it is not really a written word, English people say it, they don't write it) who hardly have something anything to eat? Something really seems to be wrong in our society.
Check your daily life and wonder if you're doing what really mathers matters. If you aren't you're not (this just sounds better, you aren't needs something added to it like If you aren't like this...), it's time to think about how you can change it. I dream about changing the world. And What about you? What makes you wake up every single (single here mankes sence but, again, every morning flows better here) morning? Check it out.
Have a good 2013!

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