Happy New Year!

The New Year is around the corner again, which means I am going to step into being 27 years old. I have to admit that time waits for no man at this moment, because it seems that there are so many things I haven't done and a world of things are coming to me, which makes me feel really stressed stressful.Oh, gee! Time is the breath of my life, I must make sure that every second counts. The process may be full of difficulties, but I do will not chicken out for good, and I am so glad to grow up with you, all my dearest friends. Happy New Year!

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Good work (again)!

"I am going to step into being 27 years old" is not something a native speaker would say but I like the imagery so much I left it in :-). An alternative would be "I will turn 27..."

Don't forget :-

Capital letters for "New Year" and the personal pronoun "I".

One space after period and comma!