Snowy
It's has snowed today,it makes me very happy.I love snow,because it beautiful! But not so long.The weather has been becoming cold.I hope you could wear more clothes,More take care of yourself!
今天下雪了，这让我很开心，我喜欢雪，因为它很漂亮，但下得不是很长，天气开始变得冷了，我希望你能多穿点衣服，多照顾你自己！
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Snowy
It has snowed today, which it makes me very happy. I love snow because it's beautiful! But not for much so longer. The weather has been becoming cold. I hope you could can wear more clothes. More Take better care of yourself!
今天下雪了，这让我很开心，我喜欢雪，因为它很漂亮，但下得不是很长，天气开始变得冷了，我希望你能多穿点衣服，多照顾你自己！
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