My short holiday
I had a three-day holiday these three days, and I just want to say holiday is more tired than my work day.
Why I say so?
The first day, I went to swimming.Since I came to Beijing, I had never went to swimming.I swam for 2 hours. It may be easy to a person who often swima but it is difficult to me.After swimming I did some sports,and then went to the sauna center.
The second day,I got up early and went to climb Xiangshan, as u know when I got to the top I was so tired, I had no energy down.SoI chose the ropeway to get down,this day was the most tired day in these 3 days.
The third day, I didn't get up early. I got up at 11:00 am.Then I went out to Xi Dan to go shopping. And I went back home at 19:30pm. I went shoping in high heel shoes.
So these three days I was so tired, I need to have a good rest I think.
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My short holiday
I had a three-day holiday these three days, and I just want to say my holiday was more tiring than my work day.Why do I say so?
The first day, I went
The second day, I got up early and went to climb Xiangshan, as you know when I got to the top I was so tired, I had no energy left.So I chose the ropeway to get down, this day was the most tiring day in these last 3 days.
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Very good job, just a few small mistakes. This was very easy to read and understand, keep up the good work :)
The third day, I didn't get up early. I got up at 11:00 am.Then I went out to Xi Dan to go shopping. And I went back home at 19:30pm. I went shoping in high heel shoes.
So these three days I was so tired, I need to have a good rest I think.
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