Corrections · 7
好久不见啊
我不知道写什么,I'll write about my day today ^_^
我没有见我的最好朋友自从5月前,(自从5月前我就没有见过我最好的朋友),我们真的想念互相了。上星期她放寒假了,所以她给我打电话,问我我什么时候有空儿。最近我有多工作所以我告诉她我不知道了(delete 了)。然后今天一个朋友说了他会上班为我(陪我 I guess you want to say he whould like to hang out with you)。我很高兴啦!我和我的好朋友都终于有空儿,所以我们一起去公园啦!今天天气20华氏度,我们超冷了!然后下很多雪开始(最初,天在下大雪),可是我们没关系(不在乎),所以我们还走和说话了(我们边走路边说话)。后(最后,)2时她的爸爸给她打电话,然后我们回家。
今天跟她在公园很好玩。
:)
如果你不懂我写了,这是英文的version
I don't know what to write, so I'll write about my day today ^_^
I haven't seen my best friend for 5 months, we've really missed each other. Last week she started her winter break, so she gave me a call asking me when I would have free time. Recently, I've had a lot of work so I told her I didn't know. Then today a friend said he would work for me. I was so happy! Me and my best friend both had free time together, so we went to the park together! Today was 20 degrees Farhenheit, we were super cold! Then it started to snow a lot, but we didn't care, we still walked and talked. After 2 hours her dad called her, so then we went home.
Today was really fun at the park with her.
: )
好久不见啊
我不知道写什么,我不知道要写些什么 I'll write about my day today ^_^
我没有见我的最好朋友自从5月前我已经有5个月没有见过我最好的朋友了,
我们真的想念互相了。我们都很想念对方, 上星期她放寒假了,所以她给我打电话,问我我什么时候有空儿。最近我有多工作所以我告诉她我不知道了。然后今天一个朋友说了他会上班为我今天一个朋友说他可以代我上班。我很高兴啦!我和我的好朋友都终于终于都有空儿,所以我们一起去公园啦!今天天气气温20华氏度,我们超冷了!然后下很多雪开始后来还开始下了很大的雪,可是我们没关系没有在意,所以我们还走和说话了我们仍然边走边聊。后2时两个小时之后她的爸爸给她打电话,然后我们就回家了。
今天跟她在公园很好玩。
:)
我没有见我的最好朋友自从5月前,我有5个月没见我最好的朋友了,我们真的想念互相了。我们很想念对方。上星期她放寒假了,所以她给我打电话,问我我什么时候有空儿。最近我有多工作所以我告诉她我也不知道了。然后今天一个朋友说了他会上班为我。然而今天一个朋友说他会来替我上班。我很高兴啦!我和我的好朋友都终于有空儿,所以我们一起去公园啦!今天天气20华氏度,我们超冷了!然后下很多雪开始,可是我们没关系,所以我们还走和说话了。接着下起了很大的雪,但是我们根本不在乎,我们仍然边走边聊。后2时两小时后她的爸爸给她打电话,然后我们回家。
今天跟她在公园很好玩。
:)
BTW,version means “版本” ^_^
好久不见啊
我不知道该写什么,I'll write about my day today ^_^
我有5个月没有见我最好的朋友,我们真的非常想念相互了对方。上星期她放寒假了,所以她给我打电话,问我我什么时候有空儿。最近我有很多工作所以我告诉她我不知道了也不知道。然后今天一个朋友说了他会为代我上班。我很高兴啦!我和我的好朋友都终于有空儿,所以我们一起去公园啦!今天天气20华氏度,我们超冷了!然后开始下很多雪开始,可是我们没关系,所以我们还是边走边和说话了。后2时2个小时后她的爸爸给她打电话,然后我们回家了。
今天跟她在公园很好玩开心。
:)
如果你不懂我写了,这是英文的version
I don't know what to write, so I'll write about my day today ^_^
I haven't seen my best friend for 5 months, we've really missed each other. Last week she started her winter break, so she gave me a call asking me when I would have free time. Recently, I've had a lot of work so I told her I didn't know. Then today a friend said he would work for me. I was so happy! Me and my best friend both had free time together, so we went to the park together! Today was 20 degrees Farhenheit, we were super cold! Then it started to snow a lot, but we didn't care, we still walked and talked. After 2 hours her dad called her, so then we went home.
Today was really fun at the park with her.
: )
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