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Book that i read in last time Few days ago i complete reading "All Quiet on the Western Front" Erih Maria Remark. This book i read after "Arch of Triumph", and "Three Comrades". I read them in Russian. I want to say that i really liked this author. He write realistically, themes in his books are very serious. War. People after war, which cant find their place in world. Human life with our naturally liberties like freedom. Real men's friendship. And Love, without pink glasses.

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Book that i read in last time The last book that I read.

A few days ago I completed reading "All Quiet on the Western Front" by Erih Maria Remark. This book I read this book after "Arch of Triumph", and "Three Comrades". I read them in Russian. I want to say that I really liked this author. He writes realistically and the themes in his books are very serious. War. People after war, which cant find their place in world. War and the people after a war who can't find their place in the world. Human life with our naturally liberties like freedom. Real men's friendship. And Love, without pink glasses.

 

Notes: My corrections are mostly ordering of the words.

Always use a capital I when referring to yourself.

I was going to change "And Love without pink glasses" to "And love without rose coloured glasses" for 2 reasons - usually the word love in that position is a minor word, but writing it as Love raises it to a mythical level and I think that was your intention. And English writers usually see the world via "rose coloured" glasses but you can choose your own colour.

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Спасибо.
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Советую прочесть Гросмана "Жизнь и судьба", вот уж где действительно без розовых очков.

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