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First notebook entry: Introducing myself hi i am learning english,because i want to get a job immediately and my native language is tamil and i grew up in india and hobbies is hearing music

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I am learning English because I want to get a job immediately. My native language is Tamil and I grew up in India. My hobby is listening music.


Dont overuse "and" in your writing. Try to write short sentences, it adds beauty to the writing. Good luck.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

 

Hi, I am learning English because I want to get a job immediately. My native language is Tamil and I grew up in India. My hobby is listening to music.

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Dear Susi, I wish, you get your ideal job as soon as possible. :)

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