Think about the Time that passed away

After my birthday , I found (that) many things have (already) passed away, including even, part of my passion .

I hope, I still can have the passion to write , thinking ,_listening (to the others) ...
" Just do what you want to do ! " as stated on my birthday card.
I shall face any difficulty in my life honesty without fear, and be more brave of doing coping with any problems.

However, time is time precious. I just wanna (in formal writing: want to) hold it when I still can feel it. (better with something like:  We shall well use it before everything is too late.)

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N.B.
1)  In English, the first person singular subject pronoun ( I ) is always in capital letter. 
2)  After the modal verbs, such as "can", "must", "let", "make" or "would", it is followed by an infinitive, but not a gerund [also known as the "present participle"]. 
3)  Try to be more consistent in terms of flow of idea (as I somehow do not see a good flow of ideas between paragraphs, sorry). 

P.S. 
Please keep up the good work. / 敬請繼續努力。
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Good day.  /  祝　是日安好。