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Solar system According to modern scientific believes, in few billion years, when the most part of the hydrogen “fuel” will burn out in the Sun, it will turn into a red giant, inside which may be even the orbit of the Earth. Then the giant will turn into a white dwarf, which will gradually cool down. Is everything right?

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Solar system

According to modern scientific believes, in few billion years, when the most part of the hydrogen “fuel” will burn out in the Sun, it will turn into a red giant, inside which may be even the orbit of the Earth. Then the giant will turn into a white dwarf, which will gradually cool down.

Is everything right?

 

Solar system

According to modern scientific believes, in a few billion years, when the most part of the hydrogen “fuel” will have burned out in the Sun, it will turn into a red giant, inside which may be even the orbit of the Earth. Then the giant will turn into a white dwarf, which will gradually cool down.

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Solar system

According to modern scientific believes, in a few billion years, when the most part of the hydrogen “fuel” will burn out in the Sun, it will turn into a red giant, inside which may be even the orbit of the Earth. Then the giant will turn into a white dwarf, which will gradually cool down.

Is everything right?

 

I don't know how the earth would orbit inside a giant star.  Is that what you meant?

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правильность написания, но меня уже исправили, спасибо
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Natali, а что вас интересует, правильность написания этих 2-х предложений по Английски, или сама теория?
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Solar system

According to modern scientific beliefs, in few billion years, when the most part of the hydrogen “fuel” will have burned out in the sun, it will turn into a red giant, inside which may be even the orbit of the Earth. Then the giant will turn into a white dwarf, which will gradually cool down.

Is everything right?

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