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Christmas Day 2012 For next few days, we will celebrate Christmas day. Every body are busy prepare their needs to celebrate the Christmas Eve. House's are decoration with many ornamen. The Big Mall and the of shopping centre are offered discounts and sale. But we should be carefully to buy with the sale and discounts product, some of them was already risen the price before they offered. "note: Everybody, please make the correction of my writing. Thank you"

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Christmas Day 2012

In a few days, we will celebrate Christmas Day.
Everybody is busy preparing their needs to celebrate the Christmas Eve.
House's are decorated with many ornaments.
The Big Mall and the of shopping centre are offering discounts and sales.
But we should be carefully when we buy with the sale and discounted products, as some of them had already risen in price before they were offered.


"note: Everybody, please make the corrections to my writing.
Thank you"

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Christmas Day 2012

For next After a few days, we will be celebrating Christmas day.
Everybody People are busy with preparing their needs to celebrate the Christmas Eve.
House's Houses are decorated with many ornaments.
The Big malls and the of shopping centres are offering discounts and sale.
But, we should be careful tlyo  when buying with the sale and discounted and on-sale products, because the prices of some of them was have already been increased before the offer.risen the price before they offered. 


"Note: Everybody, please make the correction of correct my writing.
Thank you"

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Yes Kevin, Even in Indonesia many of muslim, but Indonesia is a big country in many religions. Christian is the second biggest population in here. Every Christmas in Indonesia is important Celebration day. Our Government respected it full, and for at last few years every church must be protection by polices every 24-26 December and 1-2 January. Why do people in England doesn't meaning important about their religion? Many of missionaries come from your country and the other europe country? But I think is a personnaly reason in there.
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I am a little surprised at how much Chistmas is celebrated in a Muslim country like Indonesia or a Buddhist one like Viet Nam. However, it is a good excuse to shop, decorate and celebrate in any culture. Religious meaning is not as important as it was in countries like mine, England, these days.

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