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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am learning english,because I love to travel and I want to be a chinese teacher .My major is teaching Chinese as a foreign language,so I want to speak english fluently and make friends from all over the world.my native language is chinese ,and I grew up in Fuzhou,Fujian,China.I'm study in Hangzhou now.I like singing and playing badminton

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning english, because I love to travel and I want to be a chinese teacher. My major is teaching Chinese as a foreign language, so I want to speak english fluently and make friends from all over the world. my native language is chinese, and I grew up in Fuzhou, Fujian, China. I'm studying in Hangzhou now. I also like singing and playing badminton. 

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I am learning english,because I love to travel and I want to be a chinese teacher .My major is teaching Chinese as a foreign language,so I want to speak english fluently and make friends from all over the world.my native language is chinese ,and I grew up in Fuzhou,Fujian,China.I'm studying in Hangzhou now.I like singing and playing badminton

 

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I am learning English because I love to travel and I want to be a Chinese teacher. My major is teaching Chinese as a foreign language,so I want to speak English fluently and make friends from all over the world. My native language is Chinese, and I grew up in Fuzhou, Fujian, China. I'm studying in Hangzhou now. I like singing and playing badminton.

 
 

Very fluent! The only issues appear to be in the use of punctuation. Sorry if my corrections seem picky- there really is very little wrong with it to correct!

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