Issues:

I am very happy to have found the web and I am learning English now. In fact, I have been learning English for 3 years, but now I feel that I can't improve it, even though I am studying very hard, (i can't find the ways). Here i hope to find some friends to communicate with, so we can both improve.

Especially my spoken English is very good Instead try reversing the phrase. 'My spoken English is very good'

...so I also want someone to help me improve my spoken English. Thanks very much.

The commas are only highlighted if they are spaced wrong:

Hi, I am Jen (right)

Hi,I am Jen (wrong)

Hi ,I am Jen (wrong)

But I am being very picky, don't worry!

'very' it used to show degree. It cannot be used on it's own. 'very much', 'very good', 'very hard'

Very good- if you would like to message me perhaps we can Skype? I can help with your English a little, and you can help me improve my awful Chinese!

Jen

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am very happy to find this web-site,I am learning English now, In fact ,I have learn studied English for 3years, but now I feel that I can't improve it, even though I am studying very hard, I can't find the way to improve. Here i hope to find some friends to communicate with, then we both can make improvements. Especially My spoken English is not very good, so I also want to hope someone can help me raise improve my spoken English. Thanks very much .