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my exam composition 2 august 27th 2010 friday sun today is a interesting day because i had a good time in Sun's hirthday party.the party was held in her home, and it was started at 7:30 pm and ended after two hours.in the party we had many activities, like sang dangced and had meal, it'a very filled. apart form her parents, friends,and some relatives attended to the party, and her calss mates jakcei and mary came.. finaly, the party ennded with a song. i have enjpon myself today.

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my exam composition 2

August 27th 2010 Friday sun
Today is was an interesting day because I had a good time in  at Sun's birthday party. The party was held in her home, and it was started at 7:30 pm and ended after two hours.  At in the party we had many activities, like we sang, danced and had meal. it'a very filled. It was a very full day.
Apart form her parents, friends and some relatives attended to the party.  And also her class mates Jackie and mary came.  Finally, the party ended with a song. I have enjpon enjoyed myself today.


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