my exam compozition 1
january 26th 2010
hi! it's Liming here.
glad do learn you’re coming to Beijing, i'll pick you up at airport, and then, we'll hold a welcome party for you at my home.
below are acticities when you are in beijing. first, we'll visit some famous interests like the Great Wall , Summer Place and so on.we'll also watch the New Year concert, tour downtown and go shopping.
if you have more time, i think you can remian to celebrate Spring Festival with us in beijing. it's the most important featival in a year for us.
i believe we will have much fun time together.
well, see you soon!
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my exam composition 1
January 26th 2010Hi! It's Liming here.
I'm glad to learn that you’re coming to Beijing. I'll pick you up at airport and then we'll hold a welcome party for you at my home.
Below are activities when you are in Beijing. First, we'll visit some famous places
If you have more time, I think you can stay
I believe we will have much fun time together.
Well, see you soon!
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capitals - beginning of sentences, names of places and the word "I"
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