The weather
Yesterday was warm and sunny,but it switches to rain today.
Normally the weather of Guangzhou is nice in winter,it's neither too cold nor too dry.When I was in my hometown-Hunan,I envy the people in Guangdong and Hainan.How cold it is in Hunan!We got frost bite on both our hands,feet,face,and ears.
Eason Chan sings"It never snow in the city" in Lonely Chrismas.Guangzhou has never snown as well as Hongkong,and it's a lonely Chrismas for me just like last year.
It must be cold in my hometown now.All the plants wear heavy frost,maybe the pools freeze in the morning.
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The weather
Yesterday was warm and sunny,but it began to rain today.
Normally the weather of Guangzhou is nice in winter; it's neither too cold, nor too dry. When I was in my hometown Hunan, I envied the people in Guangdong and Hainan. How cold it is in Hunan! We got frost bite on both our hands,feet,face and ears.
Eason Chan sings "It never snow in the city" in Lonely Christmas. Guangzhou never experiences snow; nor does Hong Kong, and it's a lonely Christmas for me just like last year.
It must be cold in my hometown now. All of the plants are covered in heavy frost; perhaps the pools will be frozen in the morning.
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This was a joy to correct. You made me shiver! It was well written. Good luck!
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