A beautiful day with my friends
Hi,
Today has been a beautiful day because we, ve gone to the restaurant with a lot of husband, s friends. We was around 20 persons and there were six childrens, sons and daughters my friends.
We, ve eaten fish and meat, and all was very good and we. ve bought a number for the next play of Christmas. Well, I hope we have luck in the 22th December
But if world finish to the 21th December, it, s not important that.
See you again,
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A beautiful day with my friends
Hi,
Today has been a beautiful day because we went to the restaurant with a lot of my husband's friends. There were around 20 people and there were six children; my friend's sons and daughters.
We ate fish and meat, and it all was very good and we bought a number (raffle ticket?) for the next Christmas play.
I hope we have luck on the 22nd of December (or, "December 22nd")
But if the world ends on the 21st of December (or, "December 21st") it won't matter.
See you again,
Star
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