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fragments of a project text There are fragments of a project text. Thank you in advance for text improvements. ================= The course requires a basic knowledge of information systems. It is designed for students of higher education institutions to provide with an opportunity to gain or enhance knowledge of storage systems. Innovative design includes a software for virtual labs that make it possible to use the course in distance learning for undergraduate and postgraduate qualifications. ===Course structure details This course focuses on information storage and management in different environments. Topics likely to be covered on the course include. -Storage devices (HDD, semiconductor memory, optical discs, magnetic tapes). -Data Storage Centers (RAID, storage virtualization, intelligent storage systems, data deduplication technology, cloud computing, storage infrastructure). -Storage Networking (NAS, SAN). -Security and Management of Storage Infrastructure (business continuity, data backup, archives, replication). -Data Structures and Filesystems. Course should provide accompanying materials which include. -Software for virtual labs and teaching materials. -Practice tests. A set of tasks for intermediate evaluation and final project. -Dictionary that contains terms and definitions related to storage and other information technologies. ===Implementation of a working prototype There is a screencast down below (see project presentation section) that demonstrates the developed software prototype. It shows graphical user interface, explains how to use its basic functionality. Using this tool a student could examine backup performance under different conditions. Moreover this platform allows to make different types of labs and will be the core component for the developing course on information and data storage. Virtual lab infrastructure requirements: PC with a .Net framework 3.5.

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Your English is excellent.

 

However, the article is a bit ambiguous.  It is not perfectly clear if the course has already been developed, or if it is still under development.  The confusion is caused by the fact that you often use verbs in the present simple tense, which indicates that the course already has already been fully developed.  For example, "The course requires"  "The course is designed for"  "Innovative design includes".  At other times, you give the impression the course does not yet exist:  "Topics likely to be covered"  "Course should provide"  "will be the core component"

 

I eventually arrived at the conclusion that the course is still under development.  I therefore offer you these suggested corrections based on the that assumption:

 

fragments of a project text

Here are fragments of a project text. Thank you in advance for text improvements.

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The course will require a basic knowledge of information systems. It is being designed for students of institutions of higher learning, and is intended to provide the students with the opportunity to gain or enhance their knowledge of storage systems. The course's innovative design will includes a software for virtual labs that will make it possible to use the course in distance learning for undergraduate and postgraduate qualifications.

===Course structure details

This course will focus on information storage and management in different environments. Topics likely to be covered in the course include:

-Storage devices (HDD, semiconductor memory, optical discs, and magnetic tapes).
-Data Storage Centers (RAID, storage virtualization, intelligent storage systems, data deduplication technology, cloud computing, and storage infrastructure).
-Storage Networking (NAS and SAN).
-Security and Management of Storage Infrastructure (business continuity, data backup, archives, and replication).
-Data Structures and Filesystems.

The course will provide accompanying materials which include:
-Software for virtual labsand teaching materials.
-Practice tests. A set of tasks for intermediate evaluation and for the final project.
-Dictionary that contains terms and definitions related to storage and other information technologies.

===Implementation of a working prototype

There is a screencast down below (see project presentation section) that demonstrates the developed software prototype. It shows the graphical user interface, and explains how to use its basic functionality. Using this tool, a student will be able to examine backup performance under different conditions. Moreover, this platform will allow for different types of labs, and will be the core component for the developing courseon information and data storage.

Virtual lab infrastructure requirements: PC with a .Net framework 3.5.

 

 

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