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The Min-Autumn Festival Today is the Min-Autumn Festival,it's one of the conventional festival in china.On this day,most of the chinese will have a big meal with their family.After that,we will worship of god,we also call that admire the full moon.And there're many different kind of fruit for us to eat.Besides this ,moon cake is indispensable.When i was a little child,i carried the lantern around to have fun with my little friends.But as i grow up,i didn't do it any more.Instead,i will buy many lanterns to decorate my house.Because it's rainy today,so our family stay inside to watch tv show together and laugh and so on.As we all know,there'r a tendency in china.The foreign festivals like christmas day and valentin's day is more and more popular in china,especially for the young people.Maybe it's another excuse for the lovers to do some spscial thing or exchange presents.In any case,i think maybe it's just a good time for us to relax ourselves.

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The Min-Mid-Autumn Festival [Mid as in "middle"]

Today is the Min-Autumn Festival,(period). it's one of the conventional festival in china.On this day,most of the chinese will have a big meal with their family.After that,we will worship of god, [I think you mean "pay atribute" as "god" usually refers to the Christian God, unless otherwise explained.] we also call that admire admiring the full moon.And there're are [There's no contraction here. You can, however, write "they're" or "we're.] many different kinds of fruit for us to eat.Besides this ,moon cake is indispensable.[Very good!] When i was a little child,i carried the lantern around to have fun with my little friends.But as i grow grew up,i didn't do it any more.Instead,i will buy many lanterns to decorate my house.Because it's rainy today,so [Since you used "because" you don't need "so."] our family stay inside to watch tv shows together and laugh and so on.As we all know,there'r there's a tendency for that in china.The foreign festivals like christmas day and valentine's day is are more and more popular in china,especially for the young people.Maybe it's another excuse for the lovers to do some spsecial thing or exchange presents.In any case,i think maybe it's just a good time for us to relax ourselves.

Notes for your attention:
Good use of "indespensable, in any case, tendency, instead." You have a good grasp of transitional words.
There should be a space after each punctuation: commas, periods, etc.
Look at other contractions more carefully. You do have a good grasp of "it's."
Holidays and countries should be capitalized: Valentine's Day, China, etc.
Cultural Note: Christmas (Day) we typically leave out "Day" since the celebration starts a month or sometimes more, ahead of the actual day. Because "Thanksgiving" is so close for Americans (in November) the entire period is like a time of feasting, thus, giving rise to the term "winter pounds" in reference to weight gain.
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Excellent job! 在美国买月饼真难，要买就买得很难吃。 我的中文现在都还给中国了。所以，如果我现在或者将来写错了，请改写。 我新来的，希望你能多照顾照顾。

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