first day on Bali
Yesterday was our first day on Bali. We were tired, so we decided to start our time spending with “Halo” Bali spa salon. Even after 3 hours of massage, I have not been impressed. I heard lots about it on Bali, maybe I expected too much of it. However, I enjoyed their food later and local fruits, which extraordinary names I do not remember. I hope, that today I will get more unforgettable day.
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Natasha, I agree with you. Sometimes waiting is better than an event itself.
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Miki, thank you for your wish. Maybe I will follow your recommendation. Actually I do not like to go to such a places. I went there because my cousin insisted upon it.
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Waiting for the happy days are sometimes much better than these most days.
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Wow!
I also thought that "Halo Bali" was so so.
"Queen Rose Spa" was very gooood!!!
Hava a nice time!
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First day on Bali
Yesterday was our first day on Bali. We were tired, so we decided to spend some time at the Halo Bali Spa. Even a three-hour massage did not impress me. I had heard lots about it on Bali, and maybe I expected too much from it. However, I enjoyed their food, and later, the local fruits, whose extraordinary names I do not remember. I hope, that today I will get have a more unforgettable day.
Alternative: However, I did enjoy their food, . . . .
"I enjoyed the food" is neutral. "I did enjoy" emphasizes the contrast with the fact that the massage did not impress you.
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