Search from various English teachers...
China flagBubbles Hero
A Little Luck In Big Trubbles You must have the experience that every thing went wrong. In the end, however, you saw a hope when you were about to give up in despair. And then you felt very lucky, despite how many troubles you have before. So I just experienced this yesterday. I got to work in the morning yesterday. Starting to work, I found I forgot to bring the memory stick that a important file was in. It must be sent to my client before lunch. So I hurry to go back and nearly forgot to take the walet. It took me 40 minutes again from the firm to my home. Thinking that the third 40 minutes was waiting for me, I felt exhoust in elevator. And the next thing was worse than that. It was that I failed to find my key. This made me almost mad. I had no idear, for I had no time to repeat again. Thus, I got so angry that I kicked the door heavily. At the time, the door was opened by my kicking. Because I forgot to lock the door when I left.

Corrections · 2

0

A Little Luck In Big Trubbles  Troubles

You must have the experience that every thing went wrong have experienced days where everything went wrong. In the end, however, you saw a hope just when you were about to give up in despair. And then you felt very lucky, despite how many troubles you have you'd had before. So I just experienced this yesterday.
I got to work in the morning yesterday. Starting to work, I found I forgot had forgotten to bring the memory stick that a important file was in on. It must had to be sent to my client before lunch. So I hurry hurried to go back and nearly forgot to take the walet my wallet. It took me 40 minutes again to get from the firm to my home. Thinking that the third 40 minutes was waiting for me, I felt exhoust exhausted in the elevator. And the next thing was worse than that. It was that I failed to find my key. This made me almost mad. I had no idear what to do, for I had no time to repeat the trip again. Thus, I got so angry that I kicked the door heavily hard. At the time then [or "suddenly"], the door was opened by my kicking. Because I forgot had forgotten to lock the door when I left.

About hurry/hurried: when you are telling about past experiences, it is OK, in an informal context, to switch into the present tense. But in formal English you should stick to the past tense all the way through.

This is pretty good writing. Some of the mistakes I corrected are very mild mistakes that even many native speakers would make pretty often. Sorry if I used more than one color! I didn't intend to, but I'm kind of color-blind.

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today