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Live concert
This monday, I went to a Nickelback concert of NICKEL BACK!!!
That was very exciting! One of my favorite songs is "Far Away", and they played it! I am very happy:)
The concert was in Tokyo. I went to there by Shinkansen, and stayed at/in a hotel. I came back/returned backed soon next day. Bbecause I had to work in the afternoon:(
Anyway, I hope to see them again!
Live concert
This monday, I went to a Nickel Back concert of NICKEL BACK!!!
That was very exciting! One of my favorite songs is "Far Away", they played it! I am very happy:)
The concert was in Tokyo. I went to there by Shinkansen (Is this a location or a way to travel?), and stayed a hotel. I returned soon the next day because I had to work in the afternoon.:(
Anyway, I hope to see them again! You did a great job. If you want me to correct more of you work, pleae follow me. If you need help with speaking in English, please add me to skype. My skype name is ipaycashtoday
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