I miss my gym life.
Today I was tidying my stuff,I found my belly dance belt.It reminded me of my gym life.Although I wasn't that good at belly dance,but it did give me a big kick.
It's been a year since I quit my gym last year.Time flies.I've been busy during this year,but being busy is not like working out at a gym.It's not as healthy as yoga,as exciting as belly dance.I eat more in order to deal with the pressure,that's why I need more new clothes.
So I'm thinking of making time to exercise,and try something different,jogging,badminton,Taiji,whatever that can make me feel energetic.
Anyway, it's easy to make a decision.I hope I can stick to the plan.
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Pretty nice English overall.
whatever
"Dance belt" is correct, but "dance" (the word by itself, the activity itself) should be "dancing."
making time to exercise,and try**ing** something different
during this year
This is "theoretically" OK, but it's more normal to just say "this year," "this week," etc.
Although I wasn't that good at belly dance,but it did
"Although I wasn't that good, it did"
or
"I wasn't that good, but it did
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It's terrible a Chinglish mistake, although it's good, but I don't like it.
Leave one space after each punctuation and a line between two paragraphs.
Good job.
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