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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am a Chinese girl-mia.My favorite thing is learning langages,like English,Japanese.I have lots of interest in English.And my dream is to become an excellent simultaneous interpretation.Besides,i like reading,doing sports,playing badminton ,running for example,though i am not good at running. Now i am a college student and major in customs.But i never give up in learning languages.Also i learnt Japanese a little bit on summber vocation by myself. I am extroversion and easy-going.I like making new friends.Hopefully we can be good friends with each other.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a Chinese girl-My name is Mia. My favorite thing to do is learning langages, like English and Japanese.I have lots of interest in English.And(Miao never begin a sentence with And!) My dream is to become an excellent simultaneous(dont need simultaneous in this sentence) interpretation(interpreter).Besides studying languages ,I(Always capitalize 'I' !!) like reading,doing sports,playing badminton ,running for example,though I am not very good at running.
Now(You do not have to specify that you are now a college student, english readers will assume that you are a student for the entire year) I am a college student and my major in is customs.But I will never give up in learning languages.Also I learnt learned a little Japanese a little bit on during the summber vocation vacation by myself.
I am extroversion(The word you are looking for is extraverted) and easy-going.I like making new friends.Hopefully we can be good friends with each other. (Miao this is a very Chinese way of saying this... and sounds really funny when english speakers hear it!! its better to express this sentence in a less obvious way... For example: I really like meeting new people and making new friends! this implies that you are open to being some ones friend, but doesn't sound too desperate. You feel me? )
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很好！你很聪明!

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