Corrections · 2
Here it's cold
Hi,
It's beginning to get cold here.
Today I went to university with my big red jacket and I was too cold.
I had thin shoes and I felt the chill wind through my jacket and my clothes.
NOTE: Since you are talking about something that happened in the past, your tenses need to be in agreement. Peter Gucciardi's correction is mostly correct but gets that wrong, because it mixes present and past tenses. For example, you can't have, "I had thin shoes on and I feel the chill wind" together like that because "had" is past and "feel" is present.
just missing at Christmas (I didn't correct the bolded part because I don't understand what you are trying to say) and soon I think that it's going to snow.
And your day.... how was it?
here is IT'S cold
hi
its beginning to do GET cold here.
today I get WENT to university, with I'M WEARING my big red jacket and it's doing too cold. I had a thin shoes ON and I fell FEEL the chill wind acrossTHROUGH my jacket and It entered in my clothes.
just missing at (credo che voule dire ti attesa natale?) WAIT FOR Christmas and soon I think that it's going to snow.
And your day.... how is it HOW IS YOUR DAY?
Ciao
Sto bene grazie! Natale arrivendo subito! Scusa, no so si posso scivere qui, sono nuovo soppopra questo website. Salve.
Peter
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