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A terrible experience I had an awful experience last night. A bug came flying toward my eyes in an instant, when I was walking. OMG! I waved my right hand to brush away the annoying bug. I think I killed it, but immediately I smelled an offensive odor. Uh! ... that damn bug stung the skin just under my left eye and all at once that spot on my face was feeling so hot and aching. I went back home at top speed and scrutinized myself in the mirror. Oh, what should I do ?The skin under my left eye had become dark .I washed the dark spot with face cream and soap.......I could not wash it away no matter how hard I tried ]. I had to see the doctor this afternoon. The doctor comforted me and said, "no need to worry, take it easy." She gave me some medicine and said to me "You will get better soon." I put some of cream on the skin under my left eye. After 2 hours or so, the dark spot is beginning to fade .Oh, this terrible experience will be branded on my memory.­

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"Maybe this sentences has a few mistakes. Please help me correct it, Neal :) "This is the essay which you corrected before. Now, I have posted it here."
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Maybe this sentence has a few of mistakes .please help me correct it.Neal :) thanks a lot !My teacher . (yes :) You are right !My teacher:) This is the essay which was corrected by you before .now I posted here :) )
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yes :) You are right !My teacher:) This is the essay which was corrected by you before .now I posted here :)
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I've seen this notebook posting before somewhere ...!

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