First notebook entry: Introducing myself|

I am learning English because i want to leave China to see the world. I want to work and live in Canada or another country. I hope to meet different people and make friends with them. I am a single woman and love travelling and running. I hope one day i can live in a free country somewhere in the world.

Hi ehcohuang,

This is a good effort. My orange entries are corrections, the green entries are stylistic suggestions. Remember to capitalize all first letters of sentences and the personal pronoun I no matter where it is in the sentence.

Good luck on your journey!