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san Francisco... a city to visit San Francisco is a very beautiful and interesting city. I was in the city and I visited some important museums. I took a boat for to visit Alcatraz, an important jail where were imprisoned many important criminal, amoung which Al Capone. I walked on the Golden Gate bridge, ii was very suggestive expecially when the fog cames. But the best, for me, was the possibility to know many people from different country, in particular from Asia. Was beautiful to see that different cultures and costumes can live toghether. In San Francisco I think I found everything, if I wanted to stay with many people I went to Fisherman Wharfs, if I wanted to be quiet I went to Golden Gate park, and if I wanted a good italian coffee I went to North Beach.

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San Francisco: A Great City to Visit

San Francisco is a very beautiful and interesting city.
I went to San Francisco and I visited some important museums.
I went by boat (puoi dire "took a boat") (-) to (-)Alcatraz Island, an major jail where were imprisoned many important criminals, among whom was Al Capone. (Good usage of "among")
I walked on the Golden Gate bridge, it was very majestic, especially when the fog came.

(among è una prepositizione - era dove?  era "among them"  He was among whom?  He was among them/He was amongst them.)

(Suggestive means "sexual" usually, so be careful!)

 

But the best thing, for me, was the possibility to get to know many people from different countries, from Asia in particular. It was beautiful to see that different cultures and customs can live together harmoniously.

 

(costume = when you dress up for a party or for Halloween, a disguise)


In San Francisco I think I found everything. If I wanted to be around lots of people I went to the Fisherman's Wharfs, if I wanted to be where it was quiet I went to Golden Gate park, and if I wanted a good Italian coffee I went to North Beach.

 

 

In bocca al lupo quando lavora all'estero!

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