The wild flowers of Namaqualand
I saw a TV program about The beautifulest garden flowers in the world yesterday. My favorite is "Namaqualand National Park" in South Africa. from dry and arid area transform into a vast expanse of wild flowers of every color. they are so stunning..! I want to go there so much..! :( I have to save a lot of money to go there..
Fiuuhhh... >_<'
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The wild flowers of Namaqualand
I saw a TV program about the most beautifulest garden flowers in the world yesterday. My favorite is "Namaqualand National Park" in South Africa. From a dry and arid area, it transforms into (becomes) a vast expanse of wild flowers of every color. they are so stunning..! I want to go there so much..! :( I have to save a lot of money to go there..
Fiuuhhh... >_
Well written! The phrase "a vast expanse of wild flowers" is VERY good. Remember that adjectives with 3 or more syllables always use "most/more" instead of "-est/-er". For more information, check here http://www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish/grammar/learnit/learnitv268.shtml
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The Wild Flowers of Namaqualand
I saw a TV program about The most beautiful garden flowers in the world yesterday. My favorite is the "Namaqualand National Park" in South Africa. From a dry and arid area it transform into a vast expanse of wild flowers of every color. They are so stunning..! I want to go there so much..! :( I have to save a lot of money to go there..
Fiuuhhh... >_
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The Namib is a very dry desert, but it was September and a few flowers were poking up through the sand. We only drove along old tracks to avoid harming this fragile ecosystem.
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@kevinzim : how was Namib Desert? did u see a lot of wild flowers too?
ahhh.. really?? only 14 million rupiah??? O_x
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14 million rupiah and you can be there too.
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