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Love Is a Faith    Penelope was a brave, cautious woman with strong will. For Penelope, love was a faith to support her to go through the tough time. Because she never lost faith in her husband—Odysseus, she has waited for her husband for twenty years though she was pressed to remarry by the evil suitors.    During the years without Odysseus, Penelope had to raise their son, govern the palace and face the pressure to remarry. I think she knew that she had no enough power to drive the suitors away. So, she pretended to declare that she should finish the shroud for the lord before she remarried one of them in order to buy her time. Although she said she would not meet her husband again, deep in her heart she never gave up the hope that Odyssey would be back one day. In addition, I think that although Penelope did not recognize Odysseus, she must suspect his identity. Otherwise she would not be willing to have such a sincere talk with a stranger. Also, I feel that Odyssey was a little sly and had less confident of their love because he disguised as a stranger to test Penelope’s love. Anyway, what he had done to her just because he loved and cared her. In a word, though Penelope suffered a lot, she finally got the reunion with her husband. Love was a faith to her and also love should be a faith to us. When we fall in love with someone, we should always tell each other that “I’m faith in you”!

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Love Is a Faith

   Penelope was a brave, cautious woman with strong will. For Penelope, love was a faith that supported her through the tough times. Because she never lost faith in her husband—Odysseus, she  waited for her husband for twenty years; although, she was pressed to remarry by her evil suitors.
   During the years without Odysseus, Penelope had to raise their son, govern the palace and face the pressure to remarry. I think she knew that she did not have enough power to drive the suitors away. As a result, she pretended to declare that she would finish the shroud for the lord before she remarried one of them in order to buy her time. Although she said she would not meet her husband again, deep in her heart she never gave up the hope that Odyssey would be back one day.
In addition, I think that although Penelope did not recognize Odysseus, she must have suspected that it was him. Otherwise she would not have been willing to have such a sincere talk with a stranger. Also, I feel that Odyssey was a little shy and had less confidence in their love because he  was disguised as a stranger to test Penelope’s love. What he should have done was to care for her and love her.
Although Penelope suffered a lot, she finally reunited with her husband. Love was a faith to her and alove should also be a faith to us. When we fall in love with someone, we should always say “I have  faith in you”!

 

 

 

P.S- Very well done, make sure when you write a story you only use one verb tense so if you start by using present tense dont switch to past. 

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