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my leader
today ,i have finished my work .but my leader is not a good man .he likes to play/plays games everyday.[i don't like him.my collegues don't like him] OR me and my colleagues don't like him .i can't change him ,so i should change myself .
My leader
Today , I have finished my work .but My leader is not a good man because he likes to play games everyday. I don't like him and neither do my collegues. I can't change him ,so I should change myself .
personally I think its weird to say that hes not a good man because he likes to play games. I think that you'd rather say that "My leader is not a good man because he doesn't help with the work because he plays games. It's sort of implied but it would be alot clearer to readers what your trying to say.
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