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Code, pride and honour- please correct me ;) Code, pride and honour From always enthral me other civilisation, their lifestyle, habits and culture. Particularly intrigue me the culture of Far East, and thereupon the samurais world. Why am I writing about it? Becouse I watched Edward Zwick's movie. " The Last Samurai" tells about former soldier- military veteran, capitan Nathan Algren (Tom Cruise) whose has the remorses owning to his miliraty past. Sameday he get a a proposition from his friend. Capitan Algren'll coaching soldiers emperor Meji, in Japan. Character accepts the proposal, though he dosen't know that he'll entanged in dispute between emperor and samurais. When he come to the Japan, he pick an information about enemy, later he's forced premature confrontation, which ends with defeat. Algren through unusual perseverane, kills many samurais, therefore he's spoted be their commander and taken as captive to the world entirely unknown for him as yet cuture. In this way symbolize overall outline of plot tells about conflict between emperor amd samurais, but about friendship, love tolerance and honour- may enumerate on and on. As I recollected before, movie is full of differents motives and fascinating characters among other things perfect chieftain and warrior- Katsumoto (Ken Watanabe) This's honourable man, which believe in destiny and fighting for independence Japan. Of his exemplar we can describe samurai's culture, habits and the most importants for samurais values. Edward Zwick's creation shows as also conflict tradition and culture with modernity and progress. Undecided emperor blinded in westerly culture, instead of unite his country divide it and half bring it to decline. How many people should die for understand, that the most important is own trdition and nationality distinctiveness tahn "waterly clothes, new invention". For me it's just really good realised film, which isn't only great pastime, but it's also derivation of interesting considerations. It's my home work for English I hope so here aren't many mistakes. Thanks for corrections ;)

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Code, pride and honour- please correct me ;)

Code, pride and honour

I have always been enthralled by other civilizations. Their lifestyle, habits and culture interest me. The Far East is particularly intriguing to me, as it was the world of the Samurai. Why am I writing about this? Because I watched Edward Zwick's movie.

" The Last Samurai" tells about former soldier- military veteran, Capitan Nathan Algren (Tom Cruise) whom has the remorses due to his miliraty past. One day, he got a a proposition from his friend toCapitan Algren'll coaching soldiers for emperor Meji, in Japan. He accepts the proposal. However, he dosen't know that he'll be entangled in a dispute between the emperor and the samurais. When he goes to the Japan, he obtained information about the enemy. Later, he's forced into a premature confrontation, which ends with defeat. Algren, through unusual perseverane, kills many samurais. Because of this,he's spoted by their commander and taken as captive in a world entirely unknown to him as yet cuture.

The overall outline of the plot tells about the conflict between emperor amd samurais, but also about friendship, love, tolerance,  and honour- one could go on and on.

As I recollected before, this movie is full of differents motives and fascinating characters, among other things. Perfect chieftain and warrior- Katsumoto (Ken Watanabe). He is an honourable man, who believes in destiny and fighting for Japan's independence. From his example, we can describe a samurai's culture, habits and the most importants for samurais values.


Edward Zwick's creation shows as also a conflict between tradition and culture with modernity and progress. An undecided emperor is blinded in western culture, so instead of uniting his country, he divides it and half brings it to  its decline. How many people should die for the understanding that one's own tradition and nationality is more important is own trdition and nationality distinctiveness than "waterly clothes" and "new inventions".


For me it's just  a really good realised film, which isn't only a great pastime, but it's also derivation of interesting considerations.



It's my home work for English I hope so here aren't many mistakes. Thanks for corrections ;)

You did very well! That sounds like a good movie :)
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Code, pride and honour- please correct me ;)

Code, pride and honour

From always enthral me other (The Japanese)civilisation, their lifestyle, habits and culture( always enthral me). Particularly intrigue me the culture of Far East, and thereupon the samurais world (has caught my eye). Why am I writing about it? Becouse(spelling) I watched Edward Zwick's movie.

" The Last Samurai" tells about former soldier- military veteran, capitan Nathan Algren (Tom Cruise)(;) whose has the remorses owning to his miliraty past. Sameday he get a (His life changed forever) after a proposition from his friend. Capitan Algren'll (Algren's mission is to ) coaching (the) soldiers of emperor Meji, in Japan. (The main)Character accepts the proposal, though he dosen't know that he'll (be) entanged in (a) dispute between (the) emperor and samurais. When he come to the(The arrival of the captain) in Japan, he pick an information (led him to a discovery about the samurais). Later he's forced (with a) premature confrontation towards the samurai, which ends with defeat. Algren (was taken as captive). (On that day his life began). (I am a bit confused with this part) through unusual perseverane, kills many samurais, therefore he's spoted be their commander and taken as captive to the world entirely unknown for him as yet cuture.

In this way symbolize  overall, outline of (the) plot tells (not only asserts) about (the) conflict between (the) emperor amd(spelling) samurais, but, about friendship, love tolerance and honour- may enumerate on and on.

As I recollected before, (the) movie is full of differents motives and fascinating characters. (A)mong other things (them is) the perfect chieftain and warrior- Katsumoto (Ken Watanabe). This's honourable man, which (who) believe(s) in destiny and fighting for independence (for) Japan.  (Katsumoto) Of his(is an) exemplar (of what) we can describe (as the )samurai's culture, habits and the most importants for samurais values. (you can separate this on a different sentence and expound more about the culture.


(In additionEdward) Zwick's creation (also shows as also (the) conflict of tradition and culture with and modernity (modernism) and progress. (The) Undecided emperor,blinded in( the) westerly(check spelling) culture,(decides to vanish the samurais and which would bring his empire into ruins). instead of unite his country divide it and half bring it to decline. How many people should die, for understand, that the most important is own trdition and nationality distinctiveness tahn "waterly clothes, new invention". (It does not have to be death, as the means of  punishment towards people who would like to preserve tradition). 


For me it's just really good realised film, which isn't only great pastime, but it's also derivation of interesting considerations.



It's my home work for English I hope so here aren't many mistakes. Thanks for corrections ;)



I hope this helps. when is the deadline?
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Code, pride and honour- please correct me ;)

Code, pride and honour

The lifestyles, habits and cultures of other civilisations have always interested me. The culture of Far East and the samurai's world particularly intrigue me. Why am I writing about it? Becouse I watched Edward Zwick's movie.

"The Last Samurai" tells about former soldier- military veteran, captain Nathan Algren (Tom Cruise) who suffers remorse related to his military past. He get a a proposition from his friend, Capitan Algren, who invites him to coach the soldiers of emperor Meji, in Japan. The character accepts the proposal, not knowing he'll become entanged in a dispute between the emperor and the samurais. When he comes to Japan, he picks up information about an enemy. Later he's forced into premature confrontation, which ends with defeat. Through unusual perseverance, Algren kills many samurais. As a result, he's spotted by their commander and taken as a captive to a world entirely unknown for him as yet.

The overall plot tells about conflict between emperor amd samurais, but also about friendship, love tolerance and honour- may enumerate on and on.

As I recall, the movie is full of different motives and fascinating characters; among other things, a perfect chieftain and warrior - Katsumoto (Ken Watanabe) He is an honourable man who believes in destiny and fighting for the independence of Japan. Through his example we can describe samurai's culture, habits and the most importants for samurais values.


Edward Zwick's creation shows the conflict between traditional culture, and modernity and progress. The undecided emperor, blinded by western culture, rather than unite his country divides it and half brings it to decline. How many people should die for understanding that the most important thing is one's own tradition and national distinctiveness, more than "waterly clothes, new invention". [the phrase in quotations does not make sense in English.]


For me it's just a very well realised film that isn't only a great pastime but is also thought-provoking.



It's my home work for English I hope so here aren't many mistakes. Thanks for corrections ;)

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