One of My Old Quotes (Part 2)
"I saw disaster through the broken window caused by the typhoon, but you might see it different through this picture. There's always something good behind any bad situations. So, don't give up" ^^
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One of My Old Quotes (Part 2)
"I saw ('a' or 'the') disaster through the broken window caused by the typhoon, but you might see it different(ly) through (in this) picture. (You can start with this good English saying - 'The moral of the story is') that there's always something good behind any bad situations. Don't give up" ^^
Very good! With a few corrections it reads more fluidly in English. Hebat sekali!
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One of My Old Quotes (Part 2)
"I saw disaster through the broken window caused by the typhoon, but you might see it differently through this picture. There's always something good behind any every bad situations. So, don't give up" ^___^
Nice old quote. :D THe second to last sentence is a bit strange. I would write either "There's something good behind every bad situation" or "There's always something good behind a bad situation". But using two qualifiers like always/any/every together is not quite right.
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yeah, thanks nima :)
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You've seen a real disaster through the way of your eyes to your heart,and I think, you would have felt it by your heart.And that is the different point of ours view from the window to the outside of it.
Nice and emotional.
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Jeff: that's true!! thanks ^^
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