First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I'm Anna. I want to improve my English skills because I want to apply to a master's program in America {'here' is vague and since you never initially said your location, will only confuse}. I understand most words, though almost all sometimes I will have to look a word up unknown words in dictionary, but my grammar and speech are not as good as I would like. So I would be grateful for any help in both these areas. Thank you.

Here is the same as above, except without the red correction:

Hi, I'm Anna. I want to improve my English skills because I want to apply to a master's program in America. I understand most words, though sometimes I will have to look a word up, but my grammar and speech are not as good as I would like. I would be grateful for any help in both these areas. Thank you.

*Good job, if you need any help, I'm always here to assist. =)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I'm Anna. I want to improve my English skills because I want to apply on master programme here. I understand almost everything, but sometimes I look unknown words in dictionary. My grammar and speaking are not so good as I'd like. So, I would be glad some helps (whether someone helps me) in both these directions. Thank you.

Hi Anna, corrections are in red and suggestions in blue ^-^

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I'm Anna. I want to improve my english skills because i want to apply on master programme here. I understand almost all almost everything but sometimes i look for unknown or new words in dictionary, but my grammer grammar and speak communication is not so good as which i want. So i would be glad with any help in both these directions. Thank you.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I'm Anna. I want to improve my English skills because I want to apply to a master's program in America. I understand most words, though sometimes I will have to look a word up, but my grammar and speech are not as good as I would like. I would be grateful for any help in both these areas. Thank you.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I'm Anna. I want to improve my english skills because i want to apply on master's program in America. I understand almost all sometimes i look unknown or new words in dictionary, but my grammer and speaking are not so good as i want. So i would be glad with any help in both these directions. Thank you.