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The cafe is situated in our district, is not far from the place of residence. May say, that just this cafe is more popular in our company. Not so expensive, good selection, there are always free seats to sit. At very drunk case there is a vending music machine. All also love it, especially I. And there is a dance floor, where it is possible to dance with immediate girl friend.
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The cafe is situated in our district, is not far from where I live the place of residence. If I may say so, that only this cafe is the most popular within our company: not too expensive, a good drinks selection, and there are always free seats to sit in. At very In cases of extreme drunkenness, there is a jukebox vending music machine. We all also love it, especially me. And There is also a dance floor, where it is possible to dance with your immediate girl friends.
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The cafe is situated in our district, is not so far from the place of residence. we might say that just this cafe is more popular in our company. Not so expensive, good selection, there are always free seats to sit. At very drunk case there is a vending music machine,people love it, especially I, and there is a dance floor, where it is possible to dance with immediate girl friend.
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cafe by french
coffee by english
especially me
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