Beginning of my new novel.
My friend and I were staying in the cafe. We gathered here after workday every Friday evening to drink a few bottles of beer, discuss the last parties, common acquaintances, girles, and to think where and someone with to spend this weekends.
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The beginning of my new novel.
My friend and I were sitting in the cafe. We meet here after workday every Friday evening to drink a few bottles of beers and talk about the last party, common acquaintances mutual friends, other girls, and to think about where to spend this weekend - and who with.
Some of the words were too technical or formal for the casual feeling you want to give. I've just made a few suggestions.
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Beginning of my new novel.
My friend and I were visiting in the cafe. We gather here after the work day every Friday evening to drink a few bottles of beer, discuss the lastest parties, common acquaintances, girlies, and to think of where and someone with to spend this weekend.
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