I want to learn english because I want to leave this horrible land. Please, would you like to help me?

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning english cause I want to leave this horrob land. please, help me!

Suggestions/advices/questions:

1. What would you like to learn first about Eglish?

2. "I am learning english cause I want to leave this horrob land. please, help me!" : "I want to learn english because I want to leave this horrible land. Please, would you like to help me?"

It would be better if you put details and informations in your sentence, so people would understand your purposes in learning english.

 -"Please, would you like to help me?" -> This form is more polite.

It would be better if you are not abbreviating english words.

For example: Because (correct)  Cause (incorrect)

                  Want to (correct)  Wanna (incorrect)