My little pony(season 1 episode 1)

Twilight is addicted to books.After she readed a ponies' tole tale,she believed the stars would aid in Nightmare Moon escape escaping on the thousandth year of the Summer Sun Celebration.So she let Spike help her write a letter to tell the princess of Equestria this diaster.But the reply of princess let her down.The princess thought she should stop reading the dusty old books and do some more meaningful things.Then the princess sended sent her to supervise the preparations for the Summer Sun Celebration and make friends with Ponyvile's ponies.Twilight was worried about the diaster,so she decided to check the preparations as fast as possible.But things didn't developed as she expected.She checked the banquet preparetions,weather preparations,decoration preparations and music preparations.Apple Jack was responsible for banquet preparations.She seized Twilight's hand shook it heartily.Then she introduced her family to Twilight.They begged Twilight stay for brunch.Twilight ate too much pie.After that,Twilight met Rainbow Dash and she goad her to clean the clouds in the sky.She met Rarity and Fluttershy.Finally,she come back library.When she thougt she would have time to collect proofs,all ponies appeared in the library to give her a big suprise.Ponies indulged in the happiness of Summer Sun Celebration,except Twilight.However,the princess was gone and Nightmare Moon come back.She said she would make world to be night foever.

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