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(Can someone correct this for me.Thank you!) Live means dying for something. Dying to achieve something in your life , means you are living the life. Once I had something like living my life.Good old days, which never comes back to me again.If you get easily what you want in your life, how can you die for it.If the destination of your life reaches you all along, what is the use of trying and dying. when the life becomes easier definitely it becomes boring as well.If you want to experience the joy of achieving galls, you life must be a very hard one to live or else you must dream higher. Having no dreams and galls means you are not alive, as you have no reason to die and try..

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To live means dying for something.

Dying to achieve something in your life, means you are living the life. Once I had something like living my life. I speak of good old days, which havenever come back to me again. If you get easily what you want in your life, how can you die for it? If your goals are easily met, what is the use of trying and dying? When the life becomes easier, it definitely becomes more boring as well. If you want to experience the joy of achieving goals, your life must be a very hard one to live or else you must dream higher. Having no dreams and goals means you are not alive, as you have no reason to die and try.


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Hi Surangi—good work as always. Orange means changes strongly suggested, Green means a less important or a more smooth way of saying something. Here goes:


I added I speak of because your sentence needs a verb. You can write with fragments for effect, but I wanted you to know that gramatically normally you would need a verb. 


Life because we are talking generally about life, in a philosophical sense.


Goals is the word you want; gall means insolence or an area of your skin that is sore from chafing. They sound very similar though!


I added more to boring because you used the word easier in the clause before. Easier and more boring each are in the comparative (as opposed to the positive or superlative) so in writing in English you would seek to have an equal parallel.


I like that you try to really express yourself in writing. And the content of what you say is interesting as well…good work!

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Achieving GOALS. Having NO GOALS... ' Low ambition is crime ' Keep it up.

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