First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello,I am a student who wants to improve my English. (Sentence is complete) My mother tongue is Chinese. I grew up in China, Listening to some music or walking in school with my friends. is my choice in the spare time, I seldom go to shopping...I guess it costTakes* more than 20 minutes to write this short part(also can use Draft*) .So bad...

It's cool mate don't worry about this, Start slow and learn more , Baby steps~ :)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, I am a student who wants to improve English. My mother tongue is Chinese, I grew up in China.

Listening to some music or walking in school with my friends is are my choices in the for my spare time. 

You could also say it like this:

In my spare time I enjoy listening to music and walking in school with my friends.

I seldom go to shopping... I guess it costs more than 20 minutes to write this short part. So bad...