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Hello Viktoriya
I don't speak Russian, so this is just to help with your English.
Philosophy
Do you understand ? :I louse shaking, or the right to have ?
( Who said this ? please, please, please, dont use google)))
Notes:
The past tense of "to say" is "said" , you should have used this when talking
about something in the past.
The word google is now becoming both a noun and a verb, so you can leave out the "a".
Written English and spoken English are different things in many ways.
Written English has a lot of conventions and rules. One reason for punctuation is to
highlight the important parts of text as if it was being spoken. That way you can understand what the writer is trying to tell you.
In this case, you have a number of spelling mistakes but most of what you are trying to convey can be understood.
However your main question "I louse shaking, or the right to have ?", I don't understand. You have two sentences both ending with a question mark following each other.
These are
Do you understand ? :I louse shaking, or the right to have ?
Sentence 1 - Do you understand ? ( that is clear)
Sentence 2 - I louse shaking, or the right to have ? ( that is not clear)
Reasons for lack of clarity for sentence 2
- what do you mean by "louse"
- the format of the sentence is not the format of a question.
Can you give us more information ?
Philosophy
What are your thoughts on the statement: "Am I a trembling louse (contemptable man) or do I have the right..."
(Who says this? Please, please, please don't use google)))
*Thanks for the challenge =) Without context though, it will be hard for people to give their opinion on the statement.
If I were going to ask this, I would say: Am I just a simple man, or is there something more in me? Something that gives me an additional right to power, a right to kill.
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