My little girl

I have a little girl and,she is seven months old.I love her very so much.My baby has big eyes and big head. People often say that babies who has big head will be very clever and ,i am very happy to hear that. Now,my baby being taken care of by her grandmother ,beceuse both my husband and me i have too to work. we see her once a week,sometimes i miss her very much. It is said that in foreign countries most babies are taken care of by their parents not like china.In our country lots of children have to live with their grandparents.I think it is better that babies live with their parents. 

我有一个小女孩，她七个月大了。我非常的爱她。我家宝宝眼睛大大的，头也大大的。人们都说头大的宝宝将来会很聪明，我听来很高兴。现在，我家宝宝由她奶奶照顾，因为我和宝宝爸爸都要上班。我们一周看宝宝一次。有时候，我很想宝宝。据说，在外国，大多数的宝宝都是有父母照顾的，不像在中国，很多孩子都是和爷爷奶奶一起生活的。我认为宝宝和自己的父母一起生活比较好。 

I tried my best, and by the way you use lots of commas when you really don't need  them.

My little girl

I have a little girl. She is seven months old. I love her very much. My baby has big eyes and a big head. People often say that a baby who has a big head will be very clever. I am very happy to hear that. Now, my baby is being taken care of by her grandmother because both my husband and I have to work. We see her once a week, sometimes. I miss her very much. It is said that in foreign countries most babies are taken care of by their parents, unlike China. In our country, lots of children have to live with their grandparents. I think it is better that babies live with their parents.
我有一个小女孩，她七个月大了。我非常的爱她。我家宝宝眼睛大大的，头也大大的。人们都说头大的宝宝将来会很聪明，我听来很高兴。现在，我家宝宝由她奶奶照顾，因为我和宝宝爸爸都要上班。我们一周看宝宝一次。有时候，我很想宝宝。据说，在外国，大多数的宝宝都是有父母照顾的，不像在中国，很多孩子都是和爷爷奶奶一起生活的。我认为宝宝和自己的父母一起生活比较好。