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I'm learning english because i want to study abroad
Hello, friends!
My name's Alex.It's fanstastic site.it helps for everybody.if you want to learn hebrew i can help you.I am 29 years old.
I'm learning eEnglish because i I want to study abroad.
hHello friends!
My name's (is) Alex. It's Italki is a fanstatic fantastic site. i It helps for everybody (in learning new languages). i If you want to learn hebrew, i I can help you. I am 29 years old.
I just want to comment a bit. Sorry, I am not a native speaker, but I just want to help. And I will appreciate your help in Hebew. :) You have already mastered English quite well!!! I wish I could master Hebrew as good as your English!!
1) The comments in blue is optional. I just add the bracketed explanation to make a sentence clearer.
2) The red one is correction. I believe that we must first use the name of the site to before using 'it', once again to make your sentences clearer. Sorry for being picky, for example I also corrected the use of "i" and change it with caps.
Take care!!
I'm learning english because i want to study abroad
hello friends!
My name's Alex. It's a fanstatic fantastic site.it helps for everybody.if you want to learn hebrew i can help you. I am 29 years old.
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You have a very good English already!
מצויין!
I'm learning english because i want to study abroad
Hello, Friends!
My name is Alex.It's a fanstatic site.it helps for everybody.if you want to learn hebrew I can help you.I am 29 years old.
I'm learning English, because I want to study abroad.
Hello, friends!
My name's Alex. It's a fantastic site. It helps everybody. If you want to learn Hebrew, I can help you. I am 29 years old.
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