rainbow's notebook entry: Sep 14, 2010
The four-hours lecture makes me tired and hungry.But the dinner is such a disappointment,I will never eat that kind of rice covered with potato stick again,I miss the delicious and various dishes made by my mom.Oh,I miss my mom!
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rainbow's notebook entry: Sep 14, 2010
The four-hours lecture makes me tired and hungry.But the dinner is such a disappointment,I will never eat that kind of rice covered with potato stick again,I miss the delicious and various dishes made by my mom.Oh,I miss my mom!Good job :) I understand what you are saying. Here is a rewrite for you to consider:
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I am tired and hungry after a four hour lecture. Dinner was such a disappointment - I will never eat the kind of rice covered with potato sticks [french fries] they served again. I miss the delicious and varied dishes my mother makes. Oh, I miss my mom!
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I understand that food in He Fei is very spicy, correct? I have a friend from An Hui Province who eats hot chili peppers as snacks!! Do you do that?
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rainbow's notebook entry: Sep 14, 2010
The four-hourVery good English, just one very small mistake. potato sticks??? You mean like french fries? I agree, Mom's cooking is always the best.
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